User:Madunn99/Endosymbiont/AsavariS Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(Madunn99)


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Madunn99/Endosymbiont/AsavariS_Peer_Review?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_peer_review


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Symbiogenesis

Evaluate the drafted changes
(This article is not complete yet, so I have reviewed what the author has published thus far. For the Lead section, I recommend giving a brief overview of Symbiogenesis and mentioning the article's main sections. The section on Symbiogenesis and organelles is well written and draws from a variety of proper source material. Moreover, the source material is relaiable and does not appear to have any type of bias. The example of symbiogenesis in insect species is extremely helpful in understanding the full concept. Aditionally, the new changes to the article dicusss endosymbiosis in vertebrates and how it has not been scietifically discovered yet. This differentiates between invertebrates and vertebrates which is crucial to the reader's understanding of the subject. When finished, I believe this article will be incredibly informative. )