User:Madunn99/Endosymbiont/Melboun Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Masonstrick, Mnaddo, Madunn99


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Madunn99/Endosymbiont


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Symbiogenesis

Evaluate the drafted changes
Hi everyone,

I have read your sandbox article about symbiogenesis and I think it's a great addition to the original article. I will say that including examples of species that exhibit endosymbiosis is important, but maybe you should consider moving this information to its own section. The title of your section is "Symbiogenesis and organelles" and although you did address organelles in the first paragraph, the given examples are off topic to what the title is displaying.

Overall, the information added seems to be very relevant to your topic. Your wording was also very simplistic and easy to follow.