User:Madunn99/Endosymbiont/Ravyngilstrap Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Madunn99


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
The content itself seems fine and doesn't appear to be too opinionated instead of fact based, however there are a few spelling and spacial errors that occur throughout the paragraph. There are also words missing from within the paragraph like "and", "are", "so", etc. Mainly just seeing grammatical errors, everything else looks good so far!