User:Madunn99/Endosymbiont/Trillmc Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(provide username) Madunn99


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Madunn99/Endosymbiont?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * N/A

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

I love the outline that you guys made but I would love it more if it was broken down more. I suggest putting these ideas together and connecting them would help tremendously. I also believe you can narrow down the amount on the outline to give you a better area of focus.