User:MagalyGS/Justin Dunnavant/Shelby672 Peer Review

General info
(provide username)
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):

Evaluate the drafted changes

 * 1) Your lead is very good and tells the readers exactly what to expect in the rest of the article.
 * 2) The subheadings that you have are good and I think will allow a good flow throughout the article.
 * 3) I agree with the suggestions you have made for yourself.

Improvements


 * 1) Maybe give some personal details about him if possible.
 * 2) DOB, childhood, schooling
 * 3) Make sure to keep track of what citations you are using.
 * 4) Where you put "cite here" maybe make a note saying where the information came from just so you don't have to try to find it later on.
 * 5) Make sure that the information that are in the documentaries lines up with the information that you provided in your lead.
 * 6) For example, you mention maritime archaeology and coral reef restorations so just make sure that is mentioned later on in the article as well.