User:Maggiehoang/London fog (beverage)/Aliylo Peer Review

Peer review
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General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing? maggiehoang
 * Link to draft you're reviewing: User:Maggiehoang/London fog (beverage)

Lead evaluation
The lead is very similar to the lead in the original article. Personally, I think that the only thing that you have to change is adding who is thought to have invented a London Fog, as indicated earlier and make sure to cite it. You could also introduce some of the information that you added in the sections.

Content evaluation
I am assuming that the content is up-to-date. Personally, I do not know a ton of information about this topic.

Tone and balance evaluation
The tone is neutral. It may be interesting if you were able to find sources from different regions talking about the drink and seeing if they have varying opinion.

Sources and references evaluation
You added a lot of sources compared to the original article. I would just double-check to make sure that your sources are not blog posts which can be difficult with the given topic. I am not sure if there is really academic writing about London fogs. However, it appears that you cited an academic article for the health benefits which is probably where that is most important. Also, make sure to include internal links for words like "black tea," "earl gray," "latte."

Organization evaluation
It is easy to read, and there are not any obviously grammatical or spelling mistakes. I also really appreciate how you have a table at the end showing the different variations.

Images and media evaluation
You could include pictures of steps on how to make a London fog or images of the different tea or variations possible?

Overall evaluation
Overall, it looks like you have a good start on your article. It may be nice to include subheadings of how each variation is made/ why they differ/ show what a London fog variation is.