User:Maggieterral/Gazbia Sirry/Madisonvital Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Maggieterral


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Maggieterral/Gazbia_Sirry?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Gazbia Sirry

Evaluate the drafted changes
Looks like you already have a plan to edit your article, here are a few additional suggestions:

--If you can, I think you should add a photo of the artist and some of her work (I know it can be difficult to find any images that aren't copyrighted so if you can't just focus on the article)

--I think the lead is already strong but I would recommend dividing it into 2 parts, 1 section referring more to her personal life and the other focusing more on her work as an artist

--When describing her work, go into more detail about how it looks, i.e. the scale, mediums, and colors she uses (especially if you aren't able to upload a picture of it)

--Try adding more to the International Recognition section if you are able to find any additional information

--I would recommend adding a final section discussing her death and type of legacy she left behind