User:Magnificent Mind/Choose an Article

Article Selection
Please list articles that you're considering for your Wikipedia assignment below. Begin to critique these articles and find relevant sources.

Option 1

 * Article title
 * Design history
 * Article Evaluation
 * The article lacks a worldview perspective as it is only centered around the United Kingdom and how design emerged in the united kingdom. Adding more information from different perspectives can help improve this article. This can be done by finding different articles from sources with a more diverse point of view.
 * Another thing to improve is the citation. This article only cites two sources for the whole article so far. Firstly this can be improved by ensuring that each paragraph contains a relevant citation.
 * The content of this article can also be improved by making comparison of how design has evolved overtime and how the changes in cultures and technology have facilitated these changes in design. This could also help us see how previous design theories helped build modern designs. Looking at the impacts of changes in technology and cultures on design could be a starting point.
 * Sources
 * https://www.tandfonline.com/doi/abs/10.2752/146069205789331556
 * https://www.tandfonline.com/doi/abs/10.2752/175630614X13982745783082
 * https://www.jstor.org/stable/43632228?Search=yes&resultItemClick=true&searchText=%22design+history%22&searchUri=%2Faction%2FdoBasicSearch%3FQuery%3D%2522design%2Bhistory%2522%26so%3Drel&ab_segments=0%2Fbasic_phrase_search%2Fcontrol&refreqid=fastly-default%3A922d66486446ce8e67fea14f638a3754&seq=3#metadata_info_tab_contents
 * https://www.tandfonline.com/doi/abs/10.2752/175630614X13982745783082
 * https://www.jstor.org/stable/43632228?Search=yes&resultItemClick=true&searchText=%22design+history%22&searchUri=%2Faction%2FdoBasicSearch%3FQuery%3D%2522design%2Bhistory%2522%26so%3Drel&ab_segments=0%2Fbasic_phrase_search%2Fcontrol&refreqid=fastly-default%3A922d66486446ce8e67fea14f638a3754&seq=3#metadata_info_tab_contents

Option 2

 * Article title
 * Popular culture
 * Article Evaluation
 * The history section on this article needs improve. As mentioned on the page, this section lacks a world point of view as information only focuses on the Anglosphere. The Talk Page does not have direct engagement on this section of the page. Perhaps starting a conversation on how to improve this section could be useful.
 * Although this article is heavy on citations, I do think that they could be improved as well. I came across a piece of information that used The Guardian as a source. As this was taken from a newspaper article, it challenges the neutrality and notability of the article.
 * Sources
 * https://www.jstor.org/stable/43305915?Search=yes&resultItemClick=true&searchText=%22history+of+popular+culture%22&searchUri=%2Faction%2FdoBasicSearch%3FQuery%3D%2522history%2Bof%2Bpopular%2Bculture%2522%26so%3Drel&ab_segments=0%2Fbasic_phrase_search%2Fcontrol&refreqid=fastly-default%3A63ff3f2d885636c5de277bc9a760c535&seq=4#metadata_info_tab_contents
 * https://www.tandfonline.com/doi/abs/10.1080/00131720608984917
 * https://www.tandfonline.com/doi/abs/10.1080/10253866.1998.9670310
 * https://www.tandfonline.com/doi/abs/10.1080/00131720608984917
 * https://www.tandfonline.com/doi/abs/10.1080/10253866.1998.9670310

Option 3

 * Article title
 * Drums in communication
 * Article Evaluation
 * I think that this article can improve its structure. Instead of having the type of drums being the first part of the article I would put background information or an overview to introduce readers to the topic. I would also have the subtitle "drum languages" before the types of drums section
 * The content can also be improved by not sticking to the use of drums by human beings, but also extend this to mammals at large.
 * Diversifying the content to other areas other than Africa. The significance of drumming within different traditions and cultures can be explored.
 * Sources
 * https://www.tandfonline.com/doi/abs/10.1080/1369681032000169302
 * https://www.jstor.org/stable/3884560?Search=yes&resultItemClick=true&searchText=drums+and+communication&searchUri=%2Faction%2FdoBasicSearch%3FQuery%3Ddrums%2Band%2Bcommunication%26so%3Drel&ab_segments=0%2Fbasic_search_gsv2%2Fcontrol&refreqid=fastly-default%3Adcbd919f99c65576503c2333621e0084&seq=1#metadata_info_tab_contents
 * https://www.jstor.org/stable/pdf/10.5406/blacmusiresej.33.2.0227.pdf?refreqid=excelsior%3A393f5b5d065e380b8db1a548a6d4672b&ab_segments=0%2Fbasic_search_gsv2%2Fcontrol&origin=
 * https://www.tandfonline.com/doi/abs/10.1080/1369681032000169302
 * https://www.jstor.org/stable/pdf/10.5406/blacmusiresej.33.2.0227.pdf?refreqid=excelsior%3A393f5b5d065e380b8db1a548a6d4672b&ab_segments=0%2Fbasic_search_gsv2%2Fcontrol&origin=
 * https://www.tandfonline.com/doi/abs/10.1080/1369681032000169302

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Option 5

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