User:Magnificent Mind/Design history/Vaupini Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(provide username) Magnificent Mind


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Magnificent Mind/Design history


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Design history

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Overall it is good. It has a good lead sections that explains the topics well. Some of the paragraphs don't have citations and I think it will be good to have a citation even if you are using the same source twice.