User:MahHdz01/LGBT history in Chile/IIOliveBranchII Peer Review

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Evaluate the drafted changes
The lead added looks good and encompasses the important general info.

Added diverse information on the impact colonialism had on homosexuality in Chile's natives.

Good use of sources and diverse sources

Added new information under military dictatorship to expand on a sentence already there, which had some very useful information about the background and influences of gay organizations in Chile

Also updating language fits well

Everything is well organized and reads very easily

Maybe just add embedded links here or there

Expanding more on the diverse cultures in Chile that also have histories of homosexuality like you did with colonialism would be really interesting, and would definitely benefit Wikipedia if you can find anymore sources for that