User:Maia.gouaze/Sociology of health and illness/Cobriskie Peer Review

I really enjoyed the section about theoretical perspectives. It would add a new layer of explanation that wasn't really touched upon in the original article. Your section is well researched, providing interesting historical context for a subculture not discussed otherwise. In terms of writing, punctuation is great and word choice is very engaging. My only fault with this section would be formatting. Use some indentation for new paragraphs so as to break up the writing a bit; allows for an easier read.

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