User:Maiab3/Federal Way Public Schools/Cepropst Peer Review

General info
Maiab3
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Maiab3/Federal Way Public Schools
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Federal Way Public Schools

Evaluate the drafted changes
Hi Maia! Love the work you've done on the article.

Overall Impression

I appreciate how you've updated the governance chart and added the history section into the article, I think these are great improvements!

Lead

I'm curious to know if you are keeping the other parts of the current article, like the schools information and the lead section. I'm assuming those would stay the same so I see how they don't need much editing.

Content

The content you added is relevant to the topic and up to date. The addition of the history section is great for filling in the gaps in the current knowledge on the page.

Tone and Balance

The tone you used is neutral and informative. There are no claims that are biased.

Sources and Reference

I see that you added some more sources, all of them look credible as they are directly tied to the Federal Way School District or have historical Federal Way information. I would just double check that the first source links to a page, I know you made a note about this. The third and fourth link also gave me an error to page not found. I wonder also if there are other sources you could find, maybe newspaper articles, or relevant information about their schooling statistics or what each school excels in, just an idea!

I'm curious to see if there are points in your article where you can link to other articles, so the article receives more visibility.

Organization

I love the organizational structure for the article that you are adding, the history section might be impactful to put before the list of schools. I see that in the current article they have some statistics about diversity, maybe this could be organized into another section so the lead description could stand on its own.

Images and Media

I don't see any images or media on the current website so maybe consider adding a relevant picture. Maybe there is a map with the different school zone lines or if the district has a logo you could add that as well.