User:Maiab3/Federal Way Public Schools/UWomar Peer Review

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(Maiab3)
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


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 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):

Evaluate the drafted changes
'Hi, I'm not sure if seeing the whole platform correctly or if im looking in the right place, but I just went to your sandbox. I noticed that there were changes in the stuff that was in your sandbox compared to the original article.'

'I noticed that there was no Lead in the sandbox, not sure if you'll be re-adding that or if you're completely deleting it? I think I would leave it in there. The part where it says "Federal Way Public Schools is a school district..."'

What made you take out the tables or lists of other schools?

'-I would add the thumbnail with the specific details, on the right, back if you weren't already planning it. At least as a consumer of Wikipedia I like to see those little quick facts.'

I like the addition of the history (I didn't know that)

'I think deleting the part with the censorship doesn't harm it. But maybe since it was added in there, maybe add the links to the history portion of it.'

- Maybe keeping the links as references in your history but adding some of the disputes its had (not sure if "disputes" is the right word).

' Are there any pictures that you could add maybe to your page? ~ '