User:Mailesittler/Recovery model/H3lpful4all779 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing? Mailesittler


 * Link to draft you're reviewing: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Mailesittler/Recovery_model?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists): Recovery model
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists): Recovery model

Evaluate the drafted changes
Your edits in this article are very factual and to-the-point, which is perfect for Wikipedia-style writing. I appreciated the way in which you explained additional treatment types and then went on to describe the tangible purpose. I'm not sure if this would be appropriate in the "Recovery from substance dependence" section you are editing or more so the "Concerns" section, but some additional insight in any potential considerations or harms from these various treatments feels like something which could also be of value in making sure the information shows the least amount of bias possible. Also, maybe explaining or citing certain things such as Narcan as I personally wasn't overly familiar with it prior to looking at your article. Otherwise, describing a bit more on the impact of these treatment options in addition to the purpose could really bring home the points you are making. Really good job overall!