User:Majaterzic8/Private education in Canada/Goldswoh Peer Review

Peer review
Providing more information about private schools would give this article more depth. For instance, a list of different types of private schools in Canada could be provided in this article. Furthermore, the information given in this article could be split into different subsections making it easier for the reader to recall what area of private schools they are learning about. There are also some generalizations that could be built upon by providing more information about private schools in the article; an example of this would be when it states that "there are 'numerous' privates schools in Canada". The grammar of this article could also be improved upon as some words are repeated throughout. Additionally, improving upon the sentence structure would allow for more flow when reading the article. Lastly, the article mentions the American influence on Canadian private education. This implies opinion, rather than maintaining a focus on factual information about private education.