User:Majaterzic8/Private education in Canada/Harria18 Peer Review

This article has a lot of space for editing as the cohesiveness of the language used is not as great as previous articles reviewed. It is also mentionable that private institutions such as Quest and Everest are listed and existent within the Ontario private education system, but the article lacks proper description as to the functions and features of these schools. I would research the distinctions between public and private universities on a macro level, but also including the contributions these schools have made to the education sector in Canada countrywide. To further nitpick, the article is written more like an opinion piece or essay which is not the purpose of having a wiki page. I would definitely consider re-evaluating the entire article and resourcing much of the included information.