User:MajorTDominguez/Bioenvironmental Engineering/TravisJJacobs Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

MajorTDominguez


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Bioenvironmental Engineering


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Bioenvironmental Engineering

Evaluate the drafted changes
Great job of adding a lot of references!

The third sentence in the first paragraph that says, "The information from these evaluations helps BEEs design control measures..", should be changed slightly for grammatical correctness. "helps" should help. Since "evaluations" is plural, "helps" should be singular (help) as in "They help him cross the road", as an example.

You might also want to look at some of your longer sentences. It might flow a little better if you broke some of them up.

Overall, the information you added is very high quality and the sources used are reliable.