User:MajorTDominguez/Physical hazard/Aimanarashid Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

MajorTDominguez


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:MajorTDominguez/Physical_hazard?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Physical hazard

Evaluate the drafted changes
I think that the radiation topic is very relevant and will be a good addition to the article of physical hazard. I think you should focus on defining both ionizing and non ionizing radiation in the introduction to provide a clear understanding for the reader.

The topic can then be followed by talking about how radiation is managed in the US, what organization is involved in the regulation of rules and policy regarding radiation, and maybe number of accidents involving radiation over the years.

It is probably a good move to end the section with steps that can be taken to protect people from radiation hazard. You could also include the limits set by NIOSH and OSHA related to radiation.

Aimanarashid (talk) 06:21, 24 February 2022 (UTC)