User:MajorTom2GroundControl/Hydraulic fracturing by country/Greengal.02 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

MajorTom2GroundControl


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:MajorTom2GroundControl/Hydraulic_fracturing_by_country?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template

Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

 * Hydraulic fracturing by country

Evaluate the drafted changes
This draft has good information about the selected topic and is written in a neutral tone. The research is on topic (US policy) and provides good information about regulations. All statements are supported by a source. However, there are many grammatical errors like misspelled words and missing words which makes it hard to read and understand. I would like to more about other states that are not mentioned and how they are approaching the issue of hydraulic fracturing.