User:Maka'alaKaono/Retjenu/Archaeologyslay Peer Review

General info
Maka'alaKaono
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Maka'alaKaono/Retjenu:
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Retjenu

Evaluate the drafted changes
The planned changes look really thoughtful and will contribute positively to the article overall. Pictures will be rearranged in a way that is easier to digest. There will also be a lot of rewording of sentences that will make reading the article a lot easier. Upon reviewing the changes, it seems that the article will be more complete. User has yet to decide where some additions of information will go within the sections and how to incorporate important quotes from primary sources into sections as well. However, upon reading the rest of the planned edits in the draft, the article will be better for it.