User:Makailanava01/Pride parade/Candychill Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Makailanava01


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * No work to review
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Makailanava01/Pride_parade?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Makailanava01/Pride_parade/Bibliography?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_bibliography


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * No work to review
 * Pride parade

Evaluate the drafted changes
Nothing stated in biblography, sandbox, or in artcle from user at this time. User contacted me about progress and is adding material at a later date.