User:Makcroncats/X-gender/Bluespoon22 Peer Review

Maybe add who coined the term x-gender. I'm not sure what the proper term would be for this person but I think it's important to learn about the creator of the term.

It's a cool topic to learn about especially because I don't know much about it.

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