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Narrative communication:

For this article it needs to be edited for clarity of the context within it. Along with that it is more of a personal reflection than the facts of what narrative communication is. There also needs to be an increase in citations and references for the information in it. The references that are already included in it are not properly used in the actual text which will also need to be adjusted. It also just needs more information in general added to the subject.

A potential reference for this article would be:

Lijiang Shen & Su-yeun Seung (2018) On Measures of Message Elaboration in Narrative Communication, Communication Quarterly, 66:1, 79-95, DOI: 10.1080/01463373.2017.1334682

Modern rhetoric:

For this article the lead section needs to be rewritten and have an increase on information about the topic that focuses on the rest of what is in the article. It was also written in the point of view of personal reflection so that will also need to be adjusted. It is also short and more information can be added on it. With that being said more references or information needs to be gathered from the references already stated.

A potential reference for this article would be:

Kallia O. Wright (2007) Make it Appealing: Modern Day Rhetoric made Simple, Review of Communication, 7:2, 195-198, DOI: 10.1080/15358590701371698

Red flag (idiom):Red flag (idiom)

For this article it needs to have more information on legitimate research on the topic rather than personal research. It also needs additional citations on the topic. Within the lead section it is also not clear on the what the article will be about which will need to be adjusted. It could also use more information in general within the sections already there and potentially additional. Along with that the information in the background on this topic with the lead article and the title does not match up. The lead is making it sound more like communication rather than the literal term of red flag within the navy which would also need to be adjusted in the future.

A potential reference for this article would be:

Porter, C. (2014). ''Do Red Flags Point the Way? Early Warnings and Later Conflict in Singles' Relationships''. Arizona State University.

Hayduk, D. M. (2017). Intimate Partner Violence: Facilitating the Recognition of Yellow Flags as Early Indicators of Red Flags. Journal of health education teaching, 8(1), 33-39.