User:MakennaA/Choose an Article

Article Selection
Please list articles that you're considering for your Wikipedia assignment below. Begin to critique these articles and find relevant sources.

Option 1

 * Article title: Manifestation (popular psychology)
 * Article Evaluation: This article needs a lot of improvement. The content is heavily lacking and the sources are very inadequate.  The tone is neutral, however there is not a lot of content to go off of.  The sources used in this article are inappropriate as well.  Unfortunately, the talk page is not active at all for this article, so it may be a little difficult to get critiques from other about my improvements.  To improve this article I would add a lot more content as well as more media for the viewers.
 * Sources: https://www.sciencedirect.com/science/article/abs/pii/S0149763400000142?via%3Dihub This article is incredible helpful when it comes to explaining the actual brain science behind manifestation. This would be helpful to include in the content section about how it actually works with your brain chemicals.
 * Sources: https://www.sciencedirect.com/science/article/abs/pii/S0149763400000142?via%3Dihub This article is incredible helpful when it comes to explaining the actual brain science behind manifestation. This would be helpful to include in the content section about how it actually works with your brain chemicals.
 * Sources: https://www.sciencedirect.com/science/article/abs/pii/S0149763400000142?via%3Dihub This article is incredible helpful when it comes to explaining the actual brain science behind manifestation. This would be helpful to include in the content section about how it actually works with your brain chemicals.

Option 2

 * Article title: Deaf education
 * Article Evaluation: This article is very content heavy and provides a lot of information about Deaf education. The tone is very neutral and there are plenty of sources.  The talk page is fairly active, so there are a lot of helpful resources for improving.  The one thing I would improve for this article would be the organization of the content, it is hard to follow and needs some cleaning up.
 * Sources: https://eric.ed.gov/?id=ED316978 This is a great article talking about a lot of disparities when it comes to Deaf children and their education. Many of the flaws of the Deaf education system are pointed out here and it would be interesting to talk about them in an unbiased light.
 * Sources: https://eric.ed.gov/?id=ED316978 This is a great article talking about a lot of disparities when it comes to Deaf children and their education. Many of the flaws of the Deaf education system are pointed out here and it would be interesting to talk about them in an unbiased light.
 * Sources: https://eric.ed.gov/?id=ED316978 This is a great article talking about a lot of disparities when it comes to Deaf children and their education. Many of the flaws of the Deaf education system are pointed out here and it would be interesting to talk about them in an unbiased light.

Option 3

 * Article title: Conveyor belt sushi
 * Article Evaluation: This article has a good start, but there is lots of room for more content and history of the topic. The organization here is a bit poor, and there also aren't a lot of credible sources that are used.  To improve this, I would organize my thoughts a little better and make a more clear structure to the article.
 * Sources: https://www.sciencedirect.com/science/article/pii/S0925527307002010 This is a super in treating article talking about some technology using radio frequencies aimed to improve the overall efficiency of conveyer bely sushi, this would be a useful source when talking about conveyer belt sushi in the present and possibly even the future of the design.
 * Sources: https://www.sciencedirect.com/science/article/pii/S0925527307002010 This is a super in treating article talking about some technology using radio frequencies aimed to improve the overall efficiency of conveyer bely sushi, this would be a useful source when talking about conveyer belt sushi in the present and possibly even the future of the design.
 * Sources: https://www.sciencedirect.com/science/article/pii/S0925527307002010 This is a super in treating article talking about some technology using radio frequencies aimed to improve the overall efficiency of conveyer bely sushi, this would be a useful source when talking about conveyer belt sushi in the present and possibly even the future of the design.