User:MakennaDoramus/Evaluate an Article

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Ancient Egyptian deities

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
I chose to evaluate this article because it is a topic which I find interesting. I like reading about Ancient Egypt and it a very interesting subject. Also, I didn't know what other topic to choose.

Evaluate the article
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I think the lead section was very good. The first sentence provides a brief overview on what an Ancient Egyptian deity is and it goes into more detail as the paragraph continues. As far as content goes, I think it would make the article loner if there were to be examples of deities included in the contents section. I think it would make a more comprehensive article to include articles that gave a deity and talked about how they fit in each section that is included. The overall tone of the article seemed to be one that was unbiased and professional. I did not notice any sections where there was language contrary to this. The list of sources and references were extensive and from what I saw, they all appeared to be from reputable sources. The images are all well captioned, but personally I felt like there could be a little more images included. If I were someone reading this article, I would want there to be more images to remain more engaged in the information that is being given to me. Other than adding more images, I think what is on the page is visually appealing maintains a pleasant aesthetic. Overall, I think that the article is well worked on and is very comprehensive. I would say that the only thing I can think of would be to add more images about different deities.