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other link: 1. Eliane : Decline of napoleon 2. comment of the article : This article has many issues and needs copy editing for grammar, style , cohesion , tone or spelling. 3. ==edit==who was napoleon

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decline of napoleon

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how did napoleon seised in Europe 4. a. the link to the problem article: https://simple.wikipedia.org/wiki/Decline_of_napoleon b. sources for the information you plan to add: http://www.infoplease.com/encyclopedia/people/napoleon-i-decline-fall.html, http://www.historyhome.co.uk/c-eight/france/defeat.htm, http://www.amazon.com/Decline-Fall-Napoleons-Empire-Self-Destructed/dp/1853676098. c. a rough draft of the article: Everything from his battles and his tactics to his finances and hats has been subjected to repeated microscopic probing and analysis. Until now, however, there has been no study of the significant errors that Napoleon made himself which, though apparently trivial at the time, proved to be major factors in his downfall. apoleon made himself which, though apparently trivial at the time, proved to be major factors in his downfall. 5. a. the completed correct article: He peaks his military misunderstanding, as his resistance to appoint and complete supremo in the Iberian Peninsula, make a decision to invade Russia while the Spanish situation was spiraling out of control. b. a summary of changes: napoleon has made a choice to invade Russian in remarkable turning point of his career. Everything from his battles and his tactics to his finances and hats has been subjected to repeated microscopic probing and analysis. Until now, however, there has been no study of the significant errors that Napoleon made himself which, though apparently trivial at the time, proved to be major factors in his downfall.after 1807 Napoleon's judgment declined; for example, he believed that Moscow was the heart of Russia and that to capture it would lead to Russian defeat,. He had very poor opinion of Wellington as a soldier right up to the battle of Waterloo itself. c correct citations:

http://www.journeybeyondtravel.com/news/morocco-travel/morocco-berber-bride-festival.html.

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where the name of berber people came from: The term Berber is a variation of the Greek original word barbaros ("barbarian"), earlier in history applied by Romans specifically to their northern hostile neighbors from Germania (modern Germany) and Celts, Iberians, Gauls, Goths and Thracians because the berbers was called by al -Barbar by the arabe the change it because it's seem like arab name to berber.

languages
The ancient Berber script is probably based on or derived from the Punic script, with some influence from the South Arabian and North Arabian scripts. Berber languages was writing with the arabic abjad, they had many different alphabet and practice languages.

festivals
There are numerous moussems – or Muslim festivals – held throughout the year and being in the country during one of them is something that cannot be avoided. If you are lucky, you may actually be able to witness one of these festivals during your own vacation. If you do, it will be a memorable experience. One of the best festivals not to miss is the Berber Bride Festival held annually in Imilchil.

link of source: http://www.journeybeyondtravel.com/news/morocco-travel/tribes-history-berbers-morocco.html

link of article: https://simple.wikipedia.org/wiki/Berber_people

link of talk page: https://simple.wikipedia.org/wiki/Talk:Berber_people name, languages, festivals. Link of my source : edhttp://www.woodhullalliance.org/2014/sex-and-the-law/private-censorship-fighting-suppression-of-speech-by-non-governmental-actors/.

Link to the article i'm editing: https://simple.wikipedia.org/wiki/Censorship.

Article tittle: Censorship.

Description of the problem, new text: this article may not be neutral , they are not more specific details. I think it would be better for us to choose some non- wikipedia sources for examples. The article has been tag for NOPV since april 2009, but without any explanation why it is tagged for that and we don't know why. Also i have a problem with some understanding sentence. Here there are some sentence about non-governmental censorship : - Scout Willis, the daughter of actors Bruce Willis and Demi Moore, recently received substantial press coverage when she walked topless through the streets of New York City in an effort to bring attention to Instagram’s censorship of women’s nipples. Instagram isn’t the only social network under fire for its censorship policies: Facebook has routinely incensed users with its censorship of not only images of breastfeeding, but political posts and pages, as well.

source of my example: http://www.huffingtonpost.com/2014/04/30/rihanna-nude-photo-instagram_n_5242700.html. Rihanna she;s a famous musician, in the the past she tried to put one of her photo on Instagram but it's doesn't working because the photo was all about nudity and Intasgram refused to accept it. 'Bold text'

Nationalism

All About Eve All about Eve is a 1950 American drama movie. The movie is about an aging Broadway star. A young fan, Eve Harrington, threatens the career and the relationships of the star. Bette Davis plays the Broadway star, Margo Channing. Anne Baxter plays Eve Harrington. Marilyn Monroe and Barbara Bates are also in the movie.

All about Eve was nominated for 14 Academy Awards. It won six, including Best Director and Best Picture.

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Eve she's an actress who had many great performance during her carier ,but she met quickly some barriers. People always expect her to do the great performance she pounds some difficult situation in her relationship with someone in the world of cinema. Quickly she get a plan to seek out because she starts having problem to sign the contrat about the movie. Some house of production doesn't like to work with her anymore and she decide to open her own house of production for the movie. Eve thanks hollywoods to give to her a awards privilege and being accept again by her fans. She finally has a success and get marry to someone else.

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The production of the movie should be enough to raise her celebrity, because apparently some of her drama movies doesn't touch anymore. Her actions are done for pure self-interest since she starts working on her self and make her career in danger. she needs a upper hand to success or she will go down. Some of stories about Eve is not more explains clearly. They should make all about Eve in long story for more understanding.

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