User:Makylam18/Management of dyslexia/MaddiMcg Peer Review

General info
Makylam18
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Makylam18/Management of dyslexia
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Management of dyslexia

Evaluate the drafted changes
This was a very detailed and dense review, but you did a phenomenal job drafting your information on this topic. The lead accurately and clearly described the article's topic. It is broken down into sections that reflect the major point's of the article topic. The topic information is accurate and up to date. My only recommendation's would be that some sentences could be re-worded or re-phrased better, but you still explained your information concisely and it is easy to understand.