User:Malex7980/Color psychology/Care.03 Peer Review

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Malex7980
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 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Malex7980/Color psychology
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Color psychology

Evaluate the drafted changes

 * I definitely think your addition will be useful to the article body as a whole. It provides a bit more information relating to the color preference area of the original article. My critique here is that the language used in your edit may not be academic enough. I would also ask you to combine alike ideas and frameworks. You have a good foundation it just seems a bit misplaced in some areas, which is slightly distracting.
 * Your article definitely tackles a neutral point of view when it comes to colors, citing evidential support in preference and within other facts. I do wonder if color preference in different in other countries/continents? This could be something to look into to provide a worldly point of view rather than just a centralized American one.
 * Your references look good. You could research a few more academic sources, however I think you have a great base.
 * I look forward to the effect of color psychology on babies and how they perceive color, emotion, and other things in relation to their age or gender.
 * Your references look good. You could research a few more academic sources, however I think you have a great base.
 * I look forward to the effect of color psychology on babies and how they perceive color, emotion, and other things in relation to their age or gender.
 * I look forward to the effect of color psychology on babies and how they perceive color, emotion, and other things in relation to their age or gender.