User:Malex7980/Color psychology/Mrwil8 Peer Review

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Malex7980 - Color Psychology
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Lead: Great lead into the portion of children's toys and their influences on children! It makes me wonder about those children that may have had a different mindset and preference despite what the norm was, for example, a young boy who was often presented with blue but avoided blue and preferred pink. The information here is very quick to the point, and in a very clean order, going into details about various age groups and keeping up with the trend of the age groups being described in their numerical order. (ex. Toddlers, 5-7 year olds, adults.)

Body: I see your body is developing well, touching into various topics and differences. My only critique is to perhaps give us more relevance if possible! For instance, what do certain colors do for these children? adults? How can certain colors affect the psychology of children? This maybe a strange input, but if you ever get the chance, look into a trend of the "sad beige mom" if you haven't already. That's a trend that constantly has me questioning the various effects that dulling and taking away colors for babies and children may affect their psychology! It may give you some insight and spark some questions and answers for yourself! Otherwise, fantastic work!