User:Mallard23/Diabetes Susceptibility in Japanese Populations/Dclark636 Peer Review

General info
Reviewing Mallard23- Diabetes Susceptibility in Japanese Populations


 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Mallard23/Diabetes_Susceptibility_in_Japanese_Populations?preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template

Peer review
Content appears to be mostly well written with some minor formatting and grammatical issues. Possible inaccuracies regarding prevalence of smoking and drinking in japan, either needs to be changed/ removed, or expanded on to explain the point that was trying to be made. Sources are thorough but some are not as recent (2006, 2007). Links all appear to be functional. The content was organized in an intuitive manner and the article flowed well.