User:Mallard23/Diabetes Susceptibility in Japanese Populations/Sdixon27 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(provide username)


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
This is great so far, but I added suggestions on blah....