User:Malll2/Cultural sensitivity/Tfranji Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Malll2/Cultural sensitivity


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Malll2/Cultural_sensitivity?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template / Cultural sensitivity


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Cultural sensitivity

Evaluate the drafted changes
When I first started reading this article it felt as if there was a lot of missing information and that many of the concepts were not explained correctly. After looking at some of the drafted edits, the article will seem more rich in information. The overall quality was improved and the content that was added has all proper citations along with it. The section that was added was a very important contribution to the article and i feel like it brought the article together. Overall the edits made are very good and the ideas are well thought out.