User:Mallory Dixon/History of the Incas/Kennaalexus Peer Review

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 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Mallory Dixon


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * History of the Incas


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * History of the Incas

Evaluate the drafted changes
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Great work on this overall. I really do think you have some good and factual sources that will definitely benefit the Wikipedia article for the better, with the information that comes from them. All your content is very relevant to the topic that you have chosen. You have a few wiki links that work but there is definitely a few more wiki links that you could make to better help the readers know more about your topic like Sapa Inca, Sun God, alpaca fur, and even Quechua, there may even be more that you could find but those really stood out to me. Most readers are not going to know or understand exactly what those words are so if you add the wiki links it would definitely benefit for your readers to better understand the information you are providing. I think the information that you added into the existing paragraph already, improved the overall quality of the article, it made it more complete and more up to date with the information you gave. The tables that you added with factual information for sure will make the article very well-organized because it is broken down into sections that reflect on the major points you talked about. One last thing that I think you could fix, it may have even been a typo but the bold information you added, where it says "The civilization last" there's a tense error. You would want to put "The civilization lasted" because it is past tense.