User:Mallory Dixon/History of the Incas/Realestsky333 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Mallory Dixon


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Mallory Dixon/History of the Incas


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * History of the Incas

Evaluate the drafted changes
* Very hard to evaluate the "out of line" pieces of your draft.

- Seen to be very well constructed and presented

- Vocabulary and grammar choices are viewed to be cleanly stated

- Ideas given to add to final article I thought were very needed. The Published article doesn't extend into the sections of information you have drafted.

- With the information you have laid out, I believe both pieces of information of the topic will correspond very well

- Your use of the citing tool seems to be welly developed throughout the page.

- References are all on point and deliver the information you have provided

-Your draft is remarkable, making it difficult for me to provide helpful feedback to help better develop your draft, it is very good