User:Malmims/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
"Talk: Anxiety Disorder"

Talk:Anxiety disorder

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
I chose this article to evaluate because anxiety disorders are a topic of interest to me and something I enjoy learning more about. I feel like this subject is more relevant than ever today as youth are fighting for mental health transparency and being open and honest about mental health disorders such as common ones like anxiety disorders. As someone who has struggled with anxiety my whole life, learning about it has helped me better understand what I am going through and healthy ways to cope. Additionally, as a future psychologist this will probably be a common disorder I see in my patients. My first honest impression of it (assuming I did this assignment correctly) is that it reads more like a blog than a wikipedia article.

Evaluate the article
I think plenty of the information given in this article is relevant, interesting, and coming from a well-educated place. However, a lot of it is original research and written from a very specific first person 's point of view which is not allowed in Wikipedia articles. I think the author of this article (IS IT ONE OR MULTIPLE?) is passionate about the subject and could write some fascinating independent work on the topic, but would have a lot of revising to do on the work as is for it to be appropriate for Wikipedia. They need more sources and to cut out the personal stories and original research and knowledge. I feel as if the article is developed well for something besides Wikipedia but needs further development. This could be done through research and use of more sources and information. I found this article through c- class articles, where I observed other wiki users put their own thoughts and opinions down to help figure out what could be done to make this article flow more cohesively. I think that this article is written well but lacks professionalism. I would not turn a formal paper in at school written in the same manner as this article, lone (?) less try to publish a wikipedia article as informal as this one is. As I previously stated, this article is not written from a neutral point of view, but it also lacks representation and struggles with putting too much information about one single thing and lacks necessary expansion and detailed sections to explain more about the topic at hand. I feel like after reading this article I learned something, but not necessarily about anxiety disorders. The information provided is not extremely outdated, which is a positive. Likewise, the few sources provided seem to be legitimate and work when you click the links. The people who have reviewed the article seem to have many of the same opinions as me about the content and structure of this article, and were helpful in trying to point out some of the things that need to be fixed. Overall, I feel as if this article has a solid foundation but needs some major editing and expansion, as well as a new voice.