User:Man I love frogs/Women who have sex with women/Eva Ewing Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(Man I Love Frogs)


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Kboles2000/Gender binary


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Gender binary

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.) This person decided to edit the Gender Binary page. I thought the content they were adding in was relevant to todays modern media by using Harry Styles as an example. In terms of organization I thought that adding this example to the section Limitations and Rejections was perfect. I felt as though the content being added was neutral. Once I see all the edits written into the actual article I think I'll have a better idea of how it flows in with the sections already written. I do think these edits make the article stronger though from adding in relevant and real world examples. I looked at the reference and it is easily accessible.