User:Manasarovari

As Hugh Carless was very particular about precision of facts I would like to contribute to the editing of the present Wikipedia entry. In its present form the entry seems to be mainly based on obituaries, which are less complete or less precise than the script originated by Hugh Carless himself in the Malcolm McBain interview in 2002,BDOHP index. On the basis of this I would like to insert postings that were omitted (e.g. Bonn);incorrectly or inprecisely dated(e.g. period of 1956-1967 during which time Carless was first working inTeheran,1956-58, then in the Information Research Department,FO,1958-61then as Private Secretary to Minister of State Lord Dundee,1961,then Head of Chancery, Budapest,1963-66).

I would like to correct Trinity College to Trinity Hall; Sherborn to Sherborne, the name Patullo is usually spelt Pattullo but this needs family confirmation;the date of CMG is 1976 not 1956

I would like to add that his father Henry Alfred Carless was more precisely Inspector-General of Police, Ajmer-Merwara and Police Advisor to the Resident of Rajputana. I think this has historical interest from the point of view of the history of the Raj. (Source London Gazette 1.1.1947 cit., on the web under Miniature Awards notes)

There are other inconsistences but I would like to know if you agree with correcting these inconsistencies? This is the first time I try to edit the Wikipedia,(although I am a professional publisher)so I would appreciate your comments before I go ahead.Manasarovari (talk) 16:48, 17 January 2012 (UTC)