User:Mandymelville/User experience design/BCMisc Peer Review

General info
Mandymelville
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Mandymelville/User experience design
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):User experience design

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

I felt that the changes contributed to the text, and so did the citations. If anything, there could be even more details on how technical writing/copywriting relates to user experience design.