User:Manna43/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
Nature (journal)

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
I chose this article because I used to read these journals in grade school and they bring facts of nature into a creative way of reading for younger audiences.

Evaluate the article
Lead section was very detailed and quite long for just an brief overview. This section could definitely be shaved down to allow the reader a quick, simple insight into the rest of the article.

There were a few pieces of media- one I enjoyed (an older Nature journal cover page) and the other was a graph that should have been formatted a little different to be easier to understand.

There are several conversations on the Talk page, including some that were asking to remove sections, however that section was still included after they had responded that they would remove it.

Overall, I think the article was good, it just needs a few brush ups to be great.