User:Mannsley/Listeria monocytogenes/Mannsley Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

CalmPeach's

Itsmelanie


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Listeria monocytogenes
 * Listeria monocytogenes

Lead
Well detailed, lots of information and sources! Perhaps some of the information, such as the fact that it is gram positive, could be listed in a table along with its other characteristics (in order to avoid excess sentences).

Organization
Routes of Infection and Infectious cycle could fit under a Heading "Infection", and then broken into subtitles. I think organization may have been the biggest problem because the content looked great!

Overall Impression
Great variety of information! I was slightly confused by the organization but loved the vast amount of references.