User:Mannsley/Magnetobacterium bavaricum/Itsmelanie Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

@Mannsley


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Mannsley/Magnetobacterium bavaricum


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Magnetobacterium bavaricum

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

In your sandbox, I can only see that you've added one reference, and some headings. The headings and resource you have added look good, but you need to add some more writing. This article also lacks a table which Dr. Funk suggested adding in class.