User:Manorhe18/Healthcare reform debate in the United States/Daniellesori Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

User:Manorhe18


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Manorhe18/Healthcare_reform_debate_in_the_United_States?preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Healthcare reform debate in the United States

Evaluate the drafted changes
Hi Rhea, here's my peer review:

Lead


 * Has the Lead been updated to reflect the new content added by your peer? - The paragraph above the section "Conservative and libertarian arguments" includes information you delve into underneath. Unsure if this is the lead section, however all of the additions seem to be straight forward.

Content


 * Is the content added relevant to the topic? - Your additions have new citations to the existing information on the article.
 * Is the content added up-to-date? - Yes, articles seem to be retrieved up-to-date.

Tone and Balance


 * Is the content added neutral? - Yes
 * Are there viewpoints that are overrepresented, or underrepresented? - No, added content provides additional information in sections.

Source and References


 * Is all new content backed up by a reliable secondary source of information? - Might help to include some citations in the lead, and the first two paragraphs under the section "Conservative and libertarian arguments." Other than that, looking great!

Organization


 * Is the content added well-written - i.e. Is it concise, clear, and easy to read? - Yes
 * Does the content added have any grammatical or spelling errors? - There seems to be a certain part in the 3rd paragraph underneath "Conservative and libertarian arguments" that is bolded. Might be an error? Some minor spacing issues in your lead paragraph, and capitalization errors for "Cold War."

Overall Impressions


 * Has the content added improved the overall quality of the article - i.e. Is the article more complete? - Yes!

Warmly,

Danielle