User:Mantifa12345/Freshwater Shoreline Management Programs/Eleios Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Mantifa12345


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Mantifa12345/Freshwater_Shoreline_Management_Programs?preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Freshwater Shoreline Management Programs

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)


 * Lead summary a good overview of subject
 * Sulphur spelled as "sulpher" in one line in the History section
 * In the Usage section, in the line "The Muskoka Watershed Council also has performed shoreline assessment...", I'd change "also has" to "has also"
 * In the Climate Change section, in the line "Climate change is causing sea level rise which impact coastal communities..." I'd say "impacts" instead of "impact"
 * Neutral tone used
 * Good variety of sources