User:Mantifa12345/Freshwater Shoreline Management Programs/Turtlegeek Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(provide username)


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)


 * euthropication → first paragraph, fix.
 * Eutrpohication → in history paragraph, fix.
 * “Climate change is causing sea level rise which impact coastal communities of salt-water bodies but invading coastal shorelines.” rephrase.
 * Hieght → climate change paragraph, fix.
 * Errosion → climate change paragraph, fix.
 * “Impacts such as increased warming of the waterbodies, increased storm runoff, quicken yearly ice melt and limit the amount of winter ice, and increased? wave hieght during storms, which increases the potential of errosion, were all found to potential impact lake shorelines.
 * Lead summarizes the topic quite nicely while still emphasizing the important points we need to grasp.
 * Mostly recent info, which is great!
 * Neutrality is clearly there, no biases detected.
 * Your structure is logical and easy to follow. Liked that you provided a historical context.
 * Vaughan, Hague; Brydges, Tom; Fenech, Adam; Lumb, Ashok (2001). "Monitoring long-term ecological changes through the ecological monitoring and assessment network: Science-based and policy relevant" (PDF). Environmental Monitoring and Assessment. 67: 3–28. → does not open