User:Manvely/Vroman effect/Banthas Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Manvely


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Manvely/Vroman_effect


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Vroman effect

Evaluate the drafted changes
- There's an extra space here: "Initially a  protein"

- Can you explain why the hydrophobic/hydrophilic is significant to the A/D model (A/D doesn't mention water so I don't see the relevance)

- Mechanism of Action is a good gap fill to the original article

- Add another sentence in the lead to reflect the new section.

- Edit the dates on your references to just YYYY or YYYY-MM-DD otherwise I think it has display problems

- Tone is neutral, stays on topic

- Pictures might be helpful

- Overall, pretty good, good work!