User:Manweyyyy/Knights of Labor/Augustanastudent Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Manweyyyy


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Manweyyyy/Knights_of_Labor?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Knights of Labor

Evaluate the drafted changes
You must have already published the lead into the Wikipedia article because it is the exact same as the opening paragraphs of the published Wikipedia article. Your origins section has a lot of the same information that is already in the Wikipedia article. There is some information that could be added but most of it is already talked about. The sources look good and reliable, it is written in a passive voice, and it flows nicely. The only thing is that most of your information is almost exactly the same as the published article, just need to find new information and add that to what you have already that isn't included in the published Wikipedia article.