User:MaoXiRong/Parody/Iwritesometimes Peer Review

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PEER REVIEW NOTES

- I like the language you use here. I think it’s informative without being too professional or formal-sounding.

- There was a section where you stated that satire is mean to mock a group/individual into correction, and I was wondering if that would be considered for editing by other wikipedians, simply because I’m not sure if all satire is focused on correcting people’s behavior. I guess what I’m asking is: is it possible for something to be satire without trying to make the group targeted correct themselves or punish them? Or would that be considered a different genre then? I hope that makes sense. If it DOES become a different genre when it loses the purposes of correction/punishment, you can disregard this comment.

- I do like that you have examples listed at the end, but I was wondering if it might be helpful for readers to include some of those examples within the sections themselves as well. For example, in the section on pastiche, I wasn’t sure I entirely understood it and would have benefited from an example up there so that I could click on it to read more. That might just be a personal preference on my part though.

- all in all, I really liked this! I think you did a good job providing more to this subject.

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?
 * MaoXiRong


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:MaoXiRong/Parody?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Parody
 * Parody

Evaluate the drafted changes
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