User:Maphouse8/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
First Dynasty of Egypt

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
It looked interesting to me. I really enjoy history and recently finished a documentary series on ancient Egypt.

Evaluate the article
The lead section had good information that described the articles topic well. It was concise and easy to read.

The information was good, but there definitely could have been more. There was only a couple sections and I'm sure there's so much more that could be added.

The writing did not seem biased to me at all.

Through viewing the talk page it seems that other people are wanting more information as well.

The sources were good, although it would have been nice to see some more recent ones in the mix. The links work well.

Overall, the article does not have a problem with good information; it just needs way more.