User:Maplestoryman/Vietnamese people/Gaquach Peer Review

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Maplestoryman
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 * User:Maplestoryman/Vietnamese people
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 * Vietnamese people

Evaluate the drafted changes
Lead:

The lead does have the new content added by my peer. It has a strong introductory sentence that defines Vietnamese people and describes the sections covered in the article. The Lead is detailed, and could be a little more concise as to not overwhelm with information early.

Content:

There was no content added, it was instead just suggestions on what writers could talk about in the article. The information is up to date, providing information on the Vietnamese people's background.

Tone and Balance:

The tone is neutral throughout the whole article, and there was no bias directly shown in the article. The article highlights the achievements of the Vietnamese people and their achievements.

Sources:

The article is well sources and is credible.

Organization:

The article is well written with good grammar. The sections are well organized and thus easy to read.

Overall Impressions:

There could be more added content, or content that elaborates more on "16th century – Modern period" as was suggested.