User:MarAJade501/Australiteuthis/MeitheFish Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

MarAJade501


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Australiteuthis


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Australiteuthis

Evaluate the drafted changes
Lead Section:

Nice lead section! I would just italicize "A. Aldrichi" in all sections of the article. I saw that it was italicized earlier in the article, but it's a quick fix. The information comprising the section is clear and well-organized. I really appreciated that you included customary units as well! Also, check your capitalizations in " within this class there are two orders, the Myospida and Oegopisdia" and, "the A. aldrichi falls under the order of Myospida, and is the only member of the genus Australiteuthis and the family Australiteuthidae." In addition to this, the sentence "Both orders under the superorder decoapodiformes" may be missing a word or two. It would also benefit this section of the article to include more citations. :)

Order:

Another great section! Just make sure to italicize as stated above. Also, there is a spelling mistake in the first sentence of the section. Overall a very informative section that I was able to learn a lot from!

Characteristics of Myopsida:

I enjoyed that you compiled all of the characteristics in a list format. It made the section very easy to read and made it look less daunting (large blocks of text usually scare people). However, there are no citations in this section, which can be a big problem if you are trying to defend your work. Statement 5 also has improper capitalization. This section might also benefit from a picture with major structures in the Myopsida so that it is easier to comprehend.

Geographical Distribution and Habitat:

I would combine these two sections, as they are very similar to one another. There are a few spelling and capitalization errors in these two sections, so I advise you to look over these sections again. You should also italicize as stated in the lead section.

Biology:

Very informative section! More citations are needed and there are also numerous capitalization errors.

Overall Article:

Very well-organized and informative article that will benefit from a few minor changes. I would just read through it one more time and fix these changes before it comes time for grading. Great job! :)

- MeitheFish